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Post  Slowly_Dying_Softly_Cryin Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:33 am

Leave Me Here
To Die Tonight
Hear My Shrill Scream
Hear My Soft Crys.

Does Anyone Know
The Pain I Feel
Is This A Dream
Or Is It Real?

Will I Wake Up
And Find That This Is All Fake
The Scars, The Tears
Your Warm Imbrace

Through Everything
I Have Been Through
I Was Wishing
For Someone Like You

You May Not Be Able To Save Me
Because Im A Lost Cause
But Dont Leave Me Here
Because Of My Flaws.

This Simple Perfection
Is Nothing More Than
A Little Girl Hiding
When They Found This Out They All Ran.

Whats Wrong With Me
Am I A Mistake
Meant To Be Forgotten
Or Dropped In A Lake?

According To My Family Im Worthless
I Have No Purpose
I Just Sit Here Day After Day
Perfecting My Surface.

I Dont Let Anyone To Close
Or Inside My Walls.
If They Get To Close
I Push Them Away From Me And All My Flaws.

I Wish One Person
Would Keep Trying If I Pushed Them Away
Instead Of Getting Upset
And Telling Me To Stay.

I Hate This Depression
Its Like A Thick Black Coat.
I Cant Find My Way Out.
And When I Do Theres A Moat.

Its Impossible To Get Through
Everything Ive Done
But Now I Feel Better,
Because Ive Found The One.
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Post  AmonTheVamp Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:03 am

Wow.. Awesome Poem.
Don't know what else to say..
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Post  Slowly_Dying_Softly_Cryin Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:07 am

Thank You ^.^
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Post  Phantasy89 Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:54 am

gosh....its an awshome poem and i think i know who the one is but lol anyways i dont know why but poems like this come reach me deep

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Post  Slowly_Dying_Softly_Cryin Tue Mar 25, 2008 11:23 pm

Thanks Jul ^.^
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Post  LunorCoil Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:09 am

Crying or Very sad
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